Killing


Joe I have just read your short story

It is brutal to say the least

It is just black and white

The developers the planning committees

Are portrayed as the bad guys

They are assassinated in cold blood

Without any mercy being shown

They were the bad guys Rob

But was direct action the only option

One of my characters Charlotte

Answers this question quite clearly

After her arrest and detention

She notes that those who were assassinated

Were given a clear option

That being

Stop now abandon your plans

Plead guilty to your crimes

The bribes and the corruption

Or you will suffer the consequences

Then why were the STAN gang finally caught

Because they had made people think

People now realised the truth

If STAN had carried on

Then it would have lost its strength

Even before the government minister was killed

There were cracks appearing

That is why Charlotte is caught

After being betrayed

By a member of the gang